BleedingAppleJuice's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Melon Bar]

Amazing

I really like it. things you could improve on is making a full- body version. her arm holding the popsicle is a little screwed up. try making the natural elbow crease more visible. this will help stregnthen the painting.

everydaycombat responds:

Thank you. I'll keep your critique in mind next time I try a digi-painting!

[The Great Marvo's Final Trick]

HOLY SHLIT

great work, but i'd like to see him have a blue face or something showing he's choking

MPoulter responds:

I don't know what shlit is, but he's already dead. Hence, the police tape. I suppose it could have a been something to consider though. Thanks for the review